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Finding Steve

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CuteMurphy's Avatar CuteMurphy
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ΘFinding SteveΘ


Hey guys! So I was just sitting around doing nothing really :P And I thought of a story I could start :D So why not give it a try ♥

Update Log
Sorry for now updating when I told you I would D: I got busy yesterday lol. Anyway, please comment and diamond if you haven't :)

Chapter 1: How it Started
(Alex's P.O.V.)

Once there was happiness. I even had a family. But Steve's brother, Victor, decided to frame Steve. As I'm guessing you're fairly confused, I guess I should explain.

Like I said, life was good. Steve and I fell in love, married, and started our own little family. The gods were good to us. They blessed our village with many crops, good weather, and it was all because of Steve. He was a hero for finally reinstalling the temple and beginning to connect back with the gods. Everyone adored him. 

I guess you could say that's why his brother chose to ruin everyone's life. Victor was always in the shadow of Steve, and he was tired of all of it. So, he asked the dark god, Herobrine, to help him turn the rest of the gods against Steve. Of course Herobrine wouldn't do it for nothing, so Victor explained how it is really helping them both. If the gods are angry and aren't helping us, they are weaker. The weaker the gods are, the stronger Herobrine is. 

That's when it all started. Herobrine framed Steve for the destruction of the entrance of the temple, when it was really Victor who did it. The gods were so angry, they "got rid of" Steve. No one knows where he is, and I'm here left alone in the middle of the chaos. Crops are harder than ever to grow, so many people are sick, and the dark god has so much power the sky is black. It feels like a living hell.
Chapter 2: Trial
(Alex's P.O.V.)

I've been trying to find clues for where my Steve could be. Where would the gods put him? That's the question. I've been reading all the stories and Mythology I can get my hands on, but none of them seem to have anything about kidnapping heroes/people. Strange isn't it? They're all about the gods helping heroes and killing and such. It's quite boring actually.

"Alex, you're wanted at court," my sister, June, says.
I've always thought it was stupid to name someone after a month, but I have to hold my tongue considering she's my sister.
"What for?" I ask.
"Steve's trial," June replies and my eyes widen.
"What?"
"You didn't hear, they're bringing him here to be judged whether he should be executed or not. And considering you're his wife-"
"Great! When is it?"
"In 10 minutes."

I rush to the courthouse and sit down in the jury. I can't wait to see him. But also scared. What if he looks like he looks sick? Or starving? I don't know what I'd do... soon the judge comes out and says,
"The gods have decided to postpone the trial to next week. They aren't all on the same page... anyway, sorry for the confusion. Please come this time next week unless I let you know otherwise."

Is that it? I don't get to see him?
Well :P I was bored and sorta just wrote this down and edited it some~ Idk if anyone will read this but lol. It was fun to write! Feedback is appreciated ♥ Until next time *salutes*

- CuteMurphy
(No longer putting CM since I figured out what most people probably think that stands for :c)


P.S. I am getting a super super awesome member named TBDG to make a better cover :D So stay tuned :3
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Update #1 : by CuteMurphy 11/21/2014 11:07:28 pmNov 21st, 2014

╞Updated Update Log╡And put it in a spoiler
╞Wrote Chapter 2╡
╞Wrote something diffferent in P.S╡

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Matman33
01/28/2015 10:40 am
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I like it, just a few little tweaks that could be done to satisfy the nitpickers. (like meeee! :D)

But since I don't feel the need to nitpick, I really like the story. It could do for some longer chapters, etc. but, hey, it's all good.
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GamingAleks
11/22/2014 3:25 am
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I read Chapter 2 :)
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SkeletonBunny
11/20/2014 2:39 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Pokemon
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I have a feeling you watch Mianite...
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CuteMurphy
11/20/2014 3:33 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Unicorn
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Nope? XD
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SkeletonBunny
11/21/2014 12:50 pm
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Wut o.0
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RenegadeRad
11/19/2014 7:02 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Explorer
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Dark go could be Herobrine and good one's Notch and Jeb and all the other developers :)
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CuteMurphy
11/20/2014 1:28 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Unicorn
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lol I don't wanna be unoriginal XD
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RenegadeRad
11/21/2014 8:01 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Explorer
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that won't be unoriginal but it will be more minecraft like. Of course people would ask you 'bout the name of the "gods" so minecraft myth Herobrine would be a good one (I don't believe in herobine actually!) :) I was just giving a suggestion XD
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RenegadeRad
11/21/2014 8:03 am
Level 18 : Journeyman Explorer
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BTW i could make an awesome 3d wallpaper for you on this topic . can I?
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CuteMurphy
11/21/2014 2:39 pm
Level 59 : Grandmaster Unicorn
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Ah xD Yeah I think I might do Herobrine~ Idk :P

And omg that would be amazing ♥ I'll give you credit or you can put it in the pic XD Or both :P
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RenegadeRad
11/22/2014 3:27 am
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I'll work on it right away!
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