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EH LEH BOOK DEMO RELEASE

Updated on Feb 8th, 2013, 2/8/13 7:39 pm | 7 logs
Published Sep 5th, 2012, 9/5/12 8:19 pm
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OK ITS OFFICAL, IM MAKING A BOOK!!! YEAH BABY YEAH. However its not going to be done for a while. Tell me if this is a good story, also i got the idea from a skin i saw. Herers the feedback or backround story.Also if i get 5 diamonds and this becomes a hit then ill make a trilogy maybe even better This is written in first person view through my view. Its pretty good.


Beta test: December 20th 2012


Book out: when i can


BOOK DEMO : http://www.mediafire.com/view/?ify899dy0zp87xf

ok due to me learning new things in English class this book will take longer then

so just wait
Creditto the maker of the skin idk who it was
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Update #7 : by vsingthegames 02/08/2013 7:39:11 pmFeb 8th, 2013

ok me learning new things in school so just wait
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9ReMiX9
• 04/05/2013 3:37 pm
• Level 65 : High Grandmaster Dragonborn
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Tips:
Tab over when characters talk

Describe actions, characters, and the way people talk

Spell numbers don't right them.

Italicize thoughts

Look over your commas and add some in
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vsingthegames
• 04/06/2013 1:50 pm
• Level 35 : Artisan Network
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thxs the books almost done ill look over but CSTs r coming.
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alexscott2000
• 12/21/2012 2:27 pm
• Level 26 : Expert Goblin
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Kewl
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Funboyfun23
• 12/21/2012 1:49 am
• Level 2 : Apprentice Narwhal
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I give you points for making a story and it's not always easy making it public. Is that the preview of the story or the beginning of the story. If it the beginning you need to edit it that's not a good way to start a story.
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vsingthegames
• 12/21/2012 2:08 am
• Level 35 : Artisan Network
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the thing u see is not it the link is it no the screen ill fix it
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DIVINE_SH4D0W
• 12/13/2012 10:56 pm
• Level 8 : Apprentice Architect
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Sounds boring, you going to make it where he goes on an adventure to get her? If so, you should add someone who is chasing him or something too.
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vsingthegames
• 12/13/2012 11:30 pm
• Level 35 : Artisan Network
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Let just say it the other way around
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TetraGC
• 09/08/2012 10:24 am
• Level 22 : Expert Explorer
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Good idea?
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vsingthegames
• 09/08/2012 10:25 am
• Level 35 : Artisan Network
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what?
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TetraGC
• 09/08/2012 10:27 am
• Level 22 : Expert Explorer
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Good idea for a story.
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