I'd ussggest try increasing the saturation of the white a bit, it seems a bit too white.

The pants are really bad. I think they should be shaded like the arms.

The back and front of the chest seem very largely pillow shaded which I dislike. The shade of green used is also to my distast as it's rather gray-ish. I'd think your skin is a mix of good and bad colouring.

The colours for brown seem perfect to me, but the shading feels all wrong, it's too shaded in my eyes and all the other colours. Skin being too dark, white being too grey, same with the green and blacks. The skin is almost lifeless because of this(For further understanding of my point, imagine a fully HD picture with a beautiful red light showing happiness, then imagine that same scene in black and white having less of an effect).


Now. Technique and execution aside, because I can go into a bit of a lecture on that, although one is definitely not needed, the creativity in this skin is remarkable. The use of golfball structuring, the fun idea of having a golfball GUN! Like holy crap, imagine this guy holding up a bank?

Seriously though, the golfball gun is pretty cool, especially with the side rack showing where the golfballs go(a minor but amazing touch). 

Also the Fanny Pack seems like a 'meh, I need to fill this space' idea. It seems rather ineffective. I'd imagine circuitry or well not a fanny pack. Definitely not white I'd like to add, I've never seen a male or a robot for that matter, or even heard or found any slightest bit of interest in a white fanny pack. It's odd and maybe it's a bit of humor I'm missing, so don't be disheartened when I say I find it rather odd and unneeded.

The wheels are fun "they see me rollin', they swingin', I'm shootin' balls into the hair and singin'!" (You get random freestyle HappyKeys because, we got a badass ova here).

An idea. Instead of a 'claw', I'd think it'd be beneficial to have a hoover(or vacuum as would be the other variation of the word) to create suction for the potential projectiles(preventing innuendos since birth). I like this idea better than an individual claw just grabbing away and probably crushing or not getting that much of a great grip on the golfballs.

I wish to sleep and you got me at my most tired moment(dude, I'm typing this at 3:10am) and well that's all I have for today.


I may of been a little harsh, but overall the idea and originality trumps the execution of the skin so that's a plus.

Enjoy the rest of your day:
-Hk

creepy with no face

ACTUALLY FITS THE THEME!

And looks rather fancy.