Welp, the poll ended, and I guess I won.

Do I need to bump this again?

Well, I have to do it.
*bump*

I don't watch Ninjago anymore and I don't really understand the concept of Master G's story. On the other hand, I think Mono's was more understandable to me.

I gotta give my vote to Mono, sorry Master G plz don't hurt me ;-;

Oh, ends in five days.

I dunno XD

Say, when does this poll end?

I'm afraid I have to vote for Mono, simply because I found it too difficult to read Master G's story. It may well be that there is nothing wrong with it as you say, but the problem is there's no way for me to tell without hurting my, sadly, mortal eyeballs.

If it's become a habit, maybe it's time to break the habit, suffice it to say

Formatting is probably a key thing here as well, for both entries, but I've said my piece already I'll shut up

ZatharelMaster G I quite literally have nothing to say. I understood nothing from your story and the capitals on every word: a) hurt my head b) are incorrect in every way.

On the other hand, Mono, I really recommend an easier formatting, a single paragraph for a single part is quite..eh...hard to read.

^ Totally agree. Though I did not spot the few grammar mistakes... Zath has sharp eyes.

And because Master G said to, I'll vote for him.

Nice job, both of you. My vote goes to Mono though.

Master G I quite literally have nothing to say. I understood nothing from your story and the capitals on every word: a) hurt my head b) are incorrect in every way.

On the other hand, Mono, I'd like to congratulate you. Regardless of who wins this via the poll, you've proven to be able to handle a difficult theme well. I did notice a mix up in the tenses, though in concept (which these days is all I care about honestly), your story is quite nice. For next time, I really recommend an easier formatting, a single paragraph for a single part is quite..eh...hard to read.

On a side note, you've inspired me to use my own theme to write something, so thank you for that.