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My first poem

ADHCOX's Avatar ADHCOX 11/3/2022 6:24 am
11/3/2022 6:24 am
ADHCOX's Avatar ADHCOX
Death always come for everyone,
Is unevitable, we all have a time
Eternal legacy we leave when we die
But we can be good people
We can make huge contributions to our world
Are our actions that tell who are and were we,
Still if we make mistakes
Alive memorials of we are that tell that we learned from our mistakes for improving as humans
In centuries the people may still remembering you,
The people may think that you were a bad person, or may remember you as a good person
Legacy is what will teach the people of the future about your life
We can choose what legacy we want to leave for all the humanity of the future
Make a great legacy and you'll make a great history
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11/03/2022 6:24 am
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ADHCOX
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I enjoyed it, possibly not a classical great but it is a great start for someone's first go, and certainly better than any I've written.
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11/02/2022 7:09 pm
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Eligames2009
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I really like it!
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10/11/2022 11:26 am
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CrownDeluxe
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Great start!


Poetry is honestly so hard.
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10/11/2022 1:12 am
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HeroWob
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Clap clap clap nice job
08/13/2022 10:25 am
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11/02/2022 6:07 pm
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Rob333
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I also love historical stuff
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08/13/2022 10:44 am
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Mind_388
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Your cat stepped on the keyboard
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07/20/2022 8:20 pm
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KILLERBEES
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Nice
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07/20/2022 8:23 pm
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Rob333
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Thank you
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07/20/2022 12:40 am
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EpicIntegrator
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:O Schiller Jr.
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07/20/2022 8:08 pm
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Rob333
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W h a t ?
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07/19/2022 6:39 pm
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CesarCarter
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Very nice hidden message
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10/11/2022 11:29 am
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CrownDeluxe
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Oh I found it!
So cool how it loops back in on itself.

Now we can officially declare it a masterpiece.
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11/02/2022 6:09 pm
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Rob333
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Definitely

I'm a master at hiding or coding messages
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10/11/2022 11:27 am
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CrownDeluxe
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Hidden massage? I need to find it.
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07/19/2022 6:41 pm
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Rob333
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Yeah.
I made the poem while i was hearing the song "The Internationale" XD
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