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The Story Of Steve, Chapter 1

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Steve woke up, and shivered as he looked outside his door, night time had come once again. He wanted to mine but, he knew beyond the reaches of his torch lit fence, was danger, in the form of other beings,

such as zombies, the mindless un-dead of his solitary life, creepers, oh god how he hated them, they were mindless drones that used stealth and their skin colour to blend in against the grass, all he'd heard from the village was that the last thing you ever heard was, "ssssSSsSSsssSSs...BOOM!"

and worst of all, endermen, these new solid black creatures that looked like they had been brought to life from obsidian, they roamed the land, picking up blocks and moving them elsewhere, seeming almost...peaceful, but what he had seen was very different, Steve's best friend Dave, decided to study one of these creatures, however when he looked at it, the creature didn't like it...It's jaws unhinged almost snake like, It's eye turned purple in the moonlight! and that was the last time Steve had ever seen his friend Dave when he@d left to go mining that night.

He sighed, looking out the window wondering where Dave was, Heaven? Hell? The Spawn Point? he would never know...

Chapter 2 Coming soon! please comment below and tell me if you liked this chapter and I'll have the next one up soon!
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[PROTOTYPE]
11/14/2011 1:43 am
Level 56 : Grandmaster Dragonborn
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DestinyBrookes
10/14/2011 1:56 am
Level 29 : Expert Creeper Hugger
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piemanjake97
10/13/2011 5:24 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Engineer
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Chapter 2 please you hot i mean.. good person.
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DestinyBrookes
10/13/2011 4:50 pm
Level 29 : Expert Creeper Hugger
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Should I put up Chapter 2?

it WILL be better I promise!
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KirbyMaster555
10/13/2011 5:52 pm
Level 39 : Artisan Toast
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DEFINITELY! You have real potential, here. Try to (no offense) fix some of those spelling errors, and the punctuation/capitalization could use some work.
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Pancakemix
10/13/2011 4:31 pm
Level 28 : Expert Caveman
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Haha, I like it
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DestinyBrookes
10/13/2011 4:33 pm
Level 29 : Expert Creeper Hugger
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I only really like the spawn point bit at the end :D
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Pancakemix
10/13/2011 4:38 pm
Level 28 : Expert Caveman
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Yeah, I kinda lol'd at that
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