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Scars Part 2

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Level 20 : Expert Narwhal
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hey guys thanks for all the great feedback on chapter 1! So ive decided to continue the story :D so here it is! At that moment it started thundering and raining. Logan and i stood in silence. All of a sudden kane started morphing into many different things. One caught our eye. for a second he turned into the default skin person. just the regular guy. But then His eyes Went white. he stayed like that for 10 seconds then vanished. We heard a hissing noise behind us and turned around only to see a white flash before our eyes. The next millisecond was the worst of my life. I got up off the ground only to see my eyesight was completely blurry. I started groaning and blacked out... I had a dream during my blackout. i was falling. But i was not screaming or shouting. i was staring intently at the ground. it was right in front of my face, but i couldn't reach out to touch it. The more i tried the more my body hurt, as if i was being squeezed for every movement i made. finally i felt i couldn't take anymore and started to wheeze and scream when suddenly i woke up. Breathing harder than normal and covered in sweat. I could kind of make out my surroundings. i was lying on the floor in what seemed the remains of my house. In the distance i could see logan lying around, still moving though. i got up with all the strength i had and started making my way towards him. each step followed by excruciating pain. I heard whispers inside my head but couldn't make them out. The only thing in my backpack was some wood and 4 pork chops. probably the remains of the contents of my chest. I got to logan and noticed he was even more injured than i was. his whole face seemed burnt, his arm had a huge gash in the side, and his legs looked like they had been run over, yet he was still breathing. "logan! Logan stay with me bro!" "Ughhhhhhhh..." He wasnt conscience. he wouldnt be for a while. i picked him up and started walking, hoping for an answer. there seemed to be nothing. no animals, no happy trees, no growing grass. I couldnt take it. I put logan down, layed on my back and fell asleep... END OF PART 2~ Thanks for reading guys, hope you enjoy the story! If so, please leave a diamond and comment :) this is not as easy as it seems! THANKS YOU IS THE BEST
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