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Mob Jam - Player JamTotem Themed Allay - Goldwings42
notes
- its very nice, brings the spirit of the totem to the allay with the eyes and the shading. reminds me of programmer art shading and makes it feel like it really is one of the Evoker's many creations that has gone rouge. would love to see a version of the vex in the same style one day.
- thanks for telling me the palette
- the wings really look nice, and while they feel a tad out of proportion, it is faithful to the totem texture and spirit.
- it is adorable and i want a plushy of one and also thanks for the great work
Totemic Cape - Sp3nc3r_
notes
- while nice and unique, i don't really feel any spirit in this, and the design feels like you could change the colors and it would still be good looking. totem isn't ingrained in it. still good, but i feel that you could do better if you wanted to. also if you want, try doing an allay, as i will let you change you submission if you'd like
- it does feel like something that would be posted on the MC marketplace if capes were allowed, so take that as you will.
- looks nice and thanks for the great work
a totem creeper - LBoomsky
notes
- very nice, i love how authentic the shading is, particularly the feet.
- the description was a nice touch, as it really gives a feel of what you vision is and how to perceive that vision
- will note that if you look at the right way, it looks like the creeper has a mustache
- not bad and thanks for the great work
Totem of Allay(Jam) - Turtle_boi21
notes
- very nice merger of the spirit of the allay and the totem soul, with a nice shading based off the allay, from what i can tell, and the palette of a totem.
- while goldwings42's allay felt more like a totem that was alive, this one feels more like an allay based on a totem. just a different ratio of totem to allay.
- transparency is something that didn't even come up during the planning process, but is used so efficiently here that i feel it would be a shame if I decided that it wasn't allowed
- also thanks for telling me the pallet type. that makes me happy.
- thanks for the great work and also do you have a plushy of this as well,?
Wither Totem v2 - ANONYMOUS123579
notes
- there are a couple issues including the fact that i am fairly certain i have seen this in a mod, the fact that it has no real body to speak of, and also the fact that you used a different pallet without notifying me. just fairly disapointed because i have seen your player skins and would love to see that kind of soul in this. your skin submission was much better
Totemic Wither of Undying | JE - TheCrypteral
notes
- very professional looking, fully takes advantage of the pallete, and also uses the spirit of the totem pretty well
- i like how you use the totem spirit to make, well, a three headed totem. similar ration of totem to mob as the first allay. looks like a evoker creation gone rampant
- i have a few minor complaints, but those are more personal (one set of eyes is looking a different direction then the others, the transparency of corners) and shouldn't effect the score you get, which i'm sure will be pretty good, as long as nothing even better comes along and over shadows it.
- also the eyes bother me. makes me uncomfortable in a way i am not used to. still good.
Totem Zombie - SpruceStudiosnotes
very nice, is better as a skin
like the shading in general, particularly on the head and back, but feels like you gave up on parts of it and just put a block of color. i also doubt the hand looks good in first person.
thanks for all the good work,cant wait to see what you do in the future
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