Published May 28th, 2018, 5/28/18 1:53 pm
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Chapter 02
//Third lifE//
- A cute, poor girl lives with her family of three on the streets for 17 years -
- Her father had left them when she was 4 and when her brother was 2 -
- While trying to survive on the streets and find some way to make money, a man with inky black eyes approached her -
- As she was desperate for money, she asked him if he had any change to spare -
- He answered with a chuckle and gave her a few dollar bills, and said that she would sure get change -
- As he left, she thanked him repeatedly and turned back to show her mother and only her because she didn’t like her brother -
- While she was counting the bills, still in awe of the amount, her brother, who saw the exchange, snuck up behind her and stabbed her to death with a knife he had found laying in the garbage -
- He was jealous of the amount and hated his sister because they had to share with her -
- This was the third time the man with inky black eyes and she met -
//Third lifE//
- A cute, poor girl lives with her family of three on the streets for 17 years -
- Her father had left them when she was 4 and when her brother was 2 -
- While trying to survive on the streets and find some way to make money, a man with inky black eyes approached her -
- As she was desperate for money, she asked him if he had any change to spare -
- He answered with a chuckle and gave her a few dollar bills, and said that she would sure get change -
- As he left, she thanked him repeatedly and turned back to show her mother and only her because she didn’t like her brother -
- While she was counting the bills, still in awe of the amount, her brother, who saw the exchange, snuck up behind her and stabbed her to death with a knife he had found laying in the garbage -
- He was jealous of the amount and hated his sister because they had to share with her -
- This was the third time the man with inky black eyes and she met -
Author's Notes
Feedback on my writing would actually be great because I feel like this chapter is badly written
Also her clothes are supposed to be rags and the reason why I didn’t hue shift for the hair was because it’s supposed to be dirty blonde and... dirty xD
Also her clothes are supposed to be rags and the reason why I didn’t hue shift for the hair was because it’s supposed to be dirty blonde and... dirty xD
Gender | Female |
Format | Java |
Model | Alex |
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(Might do a fanskin for each skin in the series)
There is something else that is noticeable but I guess no one has figured it out yet
(also that would be awesome :0)
But then if no one gets it by the end then it would be a way better "plot twist" so I guess it’s okay