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Orson grew up in the small village of Paradose just west of the major city of Wreck-edge. He was always the adventurous ones out of his friends; you could always find him up a tree, running when walking is the common option or even hiding in a small cavern. Helping people was a habit of his even when it meant he lost out on something which he really wanted for example when running through a field of red and yellow flowers he noticed a small child crying. Instinctively he stops, reaches into his back to find a cookie that he was given from his grandma. The little child reaches with his fingers stretched out grasping for this cookie. With a slight smile his passes over the cookie to the infant who eats it and starts laughing with happiness. Orson laughs back, tousles his hair and carries on running.
But when the creatures come and blitzkrieg on the village, he knew he had to change the course of the current future. He is set off by the Great Von with a light weight suit and a gas-mask as the air out there is so think he would die after vigorous excise. He leaves after a massive parade is organised for his bravery to enter the waste lands to reach Wreck-edge. When there he plans to over-throw the monarchy and free the planet from the cruel rulers.
I have a supporting story which will have multiable parts
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Into for Part One:
The sun rises on a half burnt down hut. As the beams of light flutter through the cracked walls, a man awakens from a restless slumber to find the bleeding to be reduced. After several grunts and groans he reaches to the side of the hammock he had stumbled upon the night before in pitch blackness to grab a mask.
But when the creatures come and blitzkrieg on the village, he knew he had to change the course of the current future. He is set off by the Great Von with a light weight suit and a gas-mask as the air out there is so think he would die after vigorous excise. He leaves after a massive parade is organised for his bravery to enter the waste lands to reach Wreck-edge. When there he plans to over-throw the monarchy and free the planet from the cruel rulers.
I have a supporting story which will have multiable parts
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Into for Part One:
The sun rises on a half burnt down hut. As the beams of light flutter through the cracked walls, a man awakens from a restless slumber to find the bleeding to be reduced. After several grunts and groans he reaches to the side of the hammock he had stumbled upon the night before in pitch blackness to grab a mask.
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Update #4 : by ArsenicShark 05/23/2012 11:58:50 amMay 23rd, 2012
- Added Part 4, the last part
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However, from what I can see from the 2D, it looks really good!! I love that you spent time on a great story, too! It's too bad this didn't get recognized...I am sure you will have better luck in the next contest!
I can see the 3D preview. And the file is just called Orson.PGN. And as always your help cannot be given anymore as it is already enough