title says it all. be brutally honest, tell me whats bad in specific detail so I can remedy it, you cannot hurt my feelings so don't pull your punches. I want to make top shelf quality content and i'm in this for the long haul, but I would like to get several second opinions on everything i'm doing. not asking for you to sub, just looking for some constructive criticism and actionable advice from those of you that consume minecraft video content. =)

https://www.youtube.com/user/trydar9k