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Venomous Ch. 2

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Everything was black, I knew I wasn't dead, I just knew it. And also I could feel a sharp, burning pain on my chest. For a second I couldn't remember what happened or why my chest hurt so bad. I tried to get a glimpse of something or hear any sort of noise. I wondered to myself "what is this place?"

Then I heard a familiar voice,

"That bite looks painful, I'm surprised he's actually alive," says John, we've been friends ever since 9th grade, he also lives in the apartment next to mine.

I finally crack open my eyes to see his pale face staring at me, a look of worry and horror in his expression.

"What happened, how did you find me?" I slur.

"Well," John begins. "I woke up and heard a loud thud come from your room,so I knew something was wrong. When I got there I saw that on your chest..." He gestured to my chest, and what I saw when I looked at it was a large, grey, swollen bump. Then he continues "... I almost thought you were dead, but when I realized you were breathing I rushed you to the hospital."

"Really?" I asked.

"Where else would I take you, the park?" He says, with some sarcasm in his voice.

"I owe you dude, thanks." I tell him, glad that somebody could rescue me.

"Hey, just be glad your alive," he says before closing the door behind him.
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campingdragon123
02/21/2014 10:48 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
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I may have to post ch. 3 over the weekend, Im gonna be busy
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ajaxsiep
02/16/2014 4:16 pm
Level 4 : Apprentice Architect
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the story by it selve is good but if you wait for diamonds for a new post you may wait long. in my early starting era u set my selve the goal: 15 views or more for next part. I admire your ambition but in early stages this is to ambitious
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campingdragon123
02/17/2014 4:26 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
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thx, ill keep it in mind. :)
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campingdragon123
02/16/2014 3:08 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Dragon
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sry for the short chapters, if I make any more I'll try to make it longer and more understandable.
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