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Prodigy - Chapter 1: Legacy (Book 3: The Lurking Demon Inside)

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Sorry For TheUnbelievably Long Delay. What almost a month? I am so sorry, with all of my work I had to finish up, I could not even type a word. Forgive me please. For now, enjoy this long-awaited episode. Nothing can express how sorry I am for the delay. Please enjoy, as always. If you have not read the other books, READ THEM!

--Pentakill


The hospital bed was cold, and I was left alone for a while. The doctors warned me that I am suffering from many anxiety attacks, and should calm down. He offered me a few lessons with a therapist, I wanted to say no thank you, but something had urged me to say yes. I kindly accepted his offer and he left, without a word. I stared at the ceiling and imagined it falling down on me, ending my years of misery. I wanted to cry, but I was to busy sweating. My mouth was dry and I was hungry. I tried to get up, but it seemed impossible. The wall in front of me seemed to venture further away the more I got up, I tried to scream, but nothing came out. I moaned for a long time, and went back down on my back."Alena... where are you?" I whispered to myself. My eyes became heavy when suddenly, I felt a sharp pain in my right arm.
"AHH! DAMMIT ALENA!" I screamed, getting something out of my mouth. I choked when as a man in a black kimono gripped onto my neck, squeezing all the air out.
"ALENA.. please someone... help."

"STOP SCREAMING! MICHAEL STOP! Stop screaming!"
"Bring the nurse! He is having anotherpanicattack."
"Someone, help him! Now, we needassistantasap!"


The corner of my eye flapped open, I saw a gleaming light. And a woman's face, with long brown-hair.

"Doctor, how is his condition? What's wrong with him?" a faint voice squeaked.
"Well.. he is suffering from some sort of anxiety attack. I believe he is seeing nightmares and cannot control his thoughts. His condition is stable now, but he will surely have another. Has anything... I suppose life changing happen to him lately?"
I believe the doctor said. His voice was light, and seem to have a coiling ring to it, as if he was a person to strap you down and stab you a billion of times.

I wanted to leave badly, I had remembered what Notch had told me,"Say goodbye to Rune for me... say he was a good friend, and I will miss him."


After a week of care, the doctor had reported that I was in a great condition, and had no panic attacks after that day. My legs we're so sore, as I walked through the hospital doors. I limped toward the taxi, as my sister was awaiting inside.
"Well, are you okay? What happened to you? We need to talk anyways... something happened." She faintly spoke. She was crying, and with a sorrow look she broke into more tears.
"The house... it was -


An explosion the sound of a nuke, waved through the window glass, destroying it instantly, as the car flipped over 50 feet towards a building, the hospital rippled into a massive destructive force, burning everything inside it's path.


Alena was knocked out cold as the car was mid-way stuck inside a large building, half of it ready to fall down 300 feet.


"Alena! Answer me. Come on, get out of the car!" I cried. I looked down, ready to puke as my wounds bled through the car door, dripping into a oblivious endless fall. I vomited all over the door as the explosions continued.


"ALENA! DAMMIT ALENA!" I looked at the driver's seat, nothing was there. Now that I noticed, there was never a driver, the car was empty the whole time! My face darkened as the building rampaged into a explosion from bottom up.


"NO ALENA!!" The car exploded, as my eye was covered in a never ending flame. I had to be dead, but my eyes continued to see everything. My body was burning as my right arm vein's were shining blue.


"I made a promise... to mom... to brother... to keep you safe Alena. I will not break it." As we free-fell down into the ashes andinsidiousflames, the explosions continued. I saw Alena's leg we're blown off, and the right half of her whole entire torso was missing. She was just a left arm, a left chest, and a head... I reached for her left arm. But when I finally grabbed it with my metallic left arm, her her arm tore off.
"Dammit... Alena... please... don't die on me." I grasped my breath as I flew down and grabbed her chest, not even thinking anything of it. I squeezed her chest and held on from there, the closest I could reach. My right arm this time. It was still shining blue. Then my whole entire arm suddenly exploded into a burning blue flame. My whole arm was there just covered with a sensational flame.


When I held her, my flames didn't burn her, and seemed to do nothing. I switched my arms as my right arm was severely wounded, and understood what this was. I had unlocked my true potential of my Blood Ark, when I needed it most. But what are my powers? I clenched my fist and the blue flames swirled around it, then as I pointed to the ground about 50 feet away, I released it. The flames beamed down with such incredible force and strength, as it held me up from the ground about 10 feet. I slowly let out of the powers and dropped without harm.

My whole body was exhausted. As I knew Alena would still die. She was bleeding out and her whole right side of her body was gone. Her internal organs we're spilling out and blood was still flying from the sky, her blood, that still never reached the ground. I heard screams from all over the place, as I knew this was ametropolis. My head was bleeding, but I felt no pain. Suddenly, I looked at my right arm. The blood was not red, but blue. My veins we're pumping and beating incredibly hard. It was popped out extremely far. I got on one knee as the pain spearedinto my spine. My spine had been cracked. As I looked down at the ground. With nothing but fear in my eyes.

With amazing timing, my anxiety attack hit. I screamed loud as I threw Alena across the battlefield. She thumped, and stop breathing, with the little breath she had left. My face was screaming pain as my whole body whipped around, ripping partsconcreteout of the ground. This time my scream soundedmetallic, and nothing of pure evil. As the screaming became more demonic, and my violent acts more terrifying, my veins turned black, including the flames. My eyes went from black to red. My pupils expanded to my whole eye, and a small white dot appeared in the middle. My eye-ball color was now black, and my pupils decreased size and became white. My finger-nails grew sharper and longer. As my hair became longer, my height increased to an unbelievable8 feet. I kicked a panel from the floor as it flew into the air, it spun in mid-air twenty times before I kicked it like a soccer ball straight toward Alena's skull. Her head exploded into a thousand pieces of bones and brain pieces. I roared into the black clouded sky. My metallic arm ripped off, as I was a one-arm beast. With the eyes of hunger, hunger for blood.

I opened my mouth as a red spiral appeared, then what had appeared to look like aminiature red sun morphed. Black spirals raced around it as I prepared to finish off Alena's remains. It charged around me as my skin had turned white and I had turned into a true demon. The pieces of floor below me was blown into my ball of destruction. My teeth was now sharpened to the point of a sword and my whole entire body mass increased.
"ERAEAAAAAAAAAA!" I screeched, as I crunched my mouth.
As my right arm wasn't only on fire, my whole body was.Then opening my mouth in a blink of an eye, the flame instantly poured into my mouth, releasing a flat blast of demonic powers. The C-Shaped Blast flew above the ground with incredible strength. As the width increased as it went, it was now about 20-feet wide. Surely to hit Alena. As the center of the blast reached her, it suddenly was blocked.


"I was too late to prevent it. Wasn't I?" The man in the black kimono appeared, as he was deflecting the hit with a fishing rod. He was wearing a mask, as I still couldn't see his face, as he choked me before, the light was to dense for me to see through it. His mask was also a demonic face on it, but I felt like he wasn't evil. His fishing rod was blocking it, as if he was trying to catch it.
"It's a big one, trust me!" The reel on the fishing rod spun so fast, it was as if it wasn't moving at all. "Come... ON!" He was holding the rod with one hand on the handle, not even touching the reel.
Suddenly, his mask was seeming to crack.

"Already?... I have to finish this quickly. As the reel continued, my attack began to decrease in size.

As I couldn't control anything that was going on, my pupils increased dramatically in size. I bolted towards the man as my claws left a slash mark in the air, bursting straight towards him.
"Hreeeaaaaa!" I screeched into the skies.
"Zak, Kevin, Rodney! Hold him down!" The man, desperately said.
Three small children appeared, each with different masks. Two of them held me by my one arm with incredible strength. As I roared into the sky. I could not move, paralyzed. The third one appeared right in front of me, with a deadly blow into my face. His sword went straight between my eyes, going through my head entirely.


BOOK 4: OUT 6/1/2013

Book 2:http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/prodigy---chapter-1-legacy-book-2-our-creator/
Book 4:http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/prodigy---chapter-1-legacy-book-4-the-art-of-energy/

PREDICTION FOR NEXT BOOK:

WHO DO YOU THINK THE MAN IN THE MASK WAS?

ANSWER IN THE COMMENTS, AND YOU COULD BE FEATURED IN THE NEXT BOOK!

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jadedwolf424
06/23/2013 8:25 am
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nice, but why does it say " DAMNIT ALENA" so many times? :/
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hotguysixpack
06/23/2013 11:33 am
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Well it said it 3 times...
and it did because it was a life threatening situation. He doesn't have the best relationship with his sister, and hasn't really said he loved her. So the most obvious reason is saying "Dammit" first, then calling for the only person that is there, his sister. Otherwise he is saying it like, "Dammit why did you do that?" He not really mad at her... but have you read the other books? I'm assuming you know who Alena is, and you can tell their relationship in Book 1...
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jadedwolf424
06/24/2013 1:16 pm
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Also, how can there be a book 4 if he died? "Sword stuck right between my eyes" , Plus I love haven't read your entire series.
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hotguysixpack
06/24/2013 2:10 pm
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I never said he died...
The series can't end that badly. He's in a demonic form there, just read the book 4 and it will tell you. Anyhow, there could be a book 4 even if he did died.
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jadedwolf424
06/24/2013 2:57 pm
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Ok! I just assumed that if a sword goes through your head that your brain will most likely be punctured therefor stopping your breathing, heart, etc.
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hotguysixpack
06/24/2013 3:16 pm
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You are being too serious about this, in his demon form his chest is hollow, so he has no lungs or heart. Also yeah, I just informed you in the next book :P
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Joel3679
06/17/2013 12:20 pm
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Nice Pentakill i like it
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hotguysixpack
06/17/2013 12:29 pm
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Thanks :)
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Joel3679
06/17/2013 12:35 pm
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Hey Penta can you try out my map called Nitendo remix then give me a feedback on it thanks and if your in creative mode when you start go to open land put allow cheats and then play
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xXJuicyFruitxX
05/26/2013 7:46 pm
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Hmmm! Can I Have Another Hint Lol?
I'm Still Clueless
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