I made 5 sections of a story. i worked extemely hard on this. I just want your reviews and rating on how good my work is. Heck i don't even know who is in the Dragon fires atm but pm me if u want to become one. So far all the reviews are good. I want your sepecific opinion on what i should change go to my page and just read away. Long Live The Dragon Fires!

Signed, Wereyoi

P.S subcripitons are not what im going for here comments are.