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Minecraft creepypasta: The village

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It all started when I logged onto minecraft. I went into my world titled "SuperAwesome". To this day I think I have been stupid to make a world with that name, but on to the story. When the world loaded I saw that I was in ravine. I had not logged off in this ravine. "Must be some sort of glitch." I thought to myself. So naturally I towered up to the surface. Once I reached the surface the land was unusually flat and had a cobblestone road leading to a village.So I thought to myself "Awww yeah village, lets go loot the blacksmith". Little did I know that it will be a giant mistake. So I went on to the village, once I got there (which didn't take long at all) I started looking for the blacksmith's house.I found it and naturally went and looted the chest. But instead of the usual 2 obsidian and maybe a few diamonds, there was a book. It had 2 words only. Leave now. I was pretty creeped out by it since my world is not opened to LAN and nobody besides me has ever played on this world. So I started to go outside of the blacksmith's house when I heard a THUMP sound. It was unlike any sound in minecraft, and it creeped me out more then ever. So I went outside and found that the sky was red and there was no sun. And then I saw it. An extremely realistic looking villager, with human like features, holding a knife. "What the fuck!?!?" I thought. So naturally I attacked it. I then learned that it was invincible. I then was rewarded with a giant lag spike for about 10 minutes. Then when the fps was back to normal, I saw that I was in the nether. There was a hut made out of cobblestone. Naturally I went inside. I was horrified at what I saw. It was me, covered in blood, my arms and legs ripped of of me. Organs in the ground. At this point I was scared for my life. I couldn't shut the computer off. Then I was kicked from my world, the message saying "I'm coming". To this day I am scared of what might happen to me, I cower in fear at any noise I hear, fearing that he is coming. Please, if you know anything of this, help me. I can't bear to live with this fear of dying, at any moment now he might come.

Hey guys, thanks for reading this creepypasta. Constructive criticism is welcomed and any suggestions for the future. If you liked this story then diamond it.

-Pokemon
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Gaming Donutz
09/14/2014 3:21 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
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Great short story. Diamond :D
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Moeztar
09/10/2014 1:24 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Cake
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Dang, that lag spike must've been terrifying. I MEAN good story good story.
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LavenderTownSyndrome
07/31/2014 11:49 pm
Level 23 : Expert Pokemon
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Nice.
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lobie10
03/24/2014 12:02 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Artist
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Pretty good! In my opinion, the ending quite eerie, and awesome. But, here's some advice: Hyper realism is overused, and it's just not scary anymore. The narrator seeing themselves being all torn up in a video game is also getting pretty old. And, "Little did I know it would all be a giant mistake" is kind of a spoiler of a bad situation. I think you could remove that, and the reader would have find out for themselves. But still, From 1 to 10 stars, I'd give it a 7. It's a great pasta! :3
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waffawe
03/16/2014 11:26 am
Level 8 : Apprentice Skinner
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That's actually good, a bit short though
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Wizpig1231
02/11/2014 2:32 am
Level 5 : Apprentice Engineer
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wow
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